Revelation 16: King James (KJV) and Alternate (from the Greek) Word Pictures with Reiterations (AWPR) Versions

Revelation 16

 ¹And I heard a great voice out of the temple saying to the seven angels, Go your ways, and pour out the vials of the wrath of God upon the earth.      (KJV)
          (1)   And I attentively heard a great-large voice out of the Temple,

                  speaking / saying to the 7 Angels,

                        'Go - depart (secretly, in stealth, and out of sight);

                         and pour out / spill forth the (wide-mouthed) pans - basins - bowls - vials

                         of the outburst of anger - wrath - indignation - fury  and violence of

                         the mind of GOD onto the Earth.'         (AWPR)

 ²And the first went, and poured out his vial upon the earth; and there fell a noisome and grievous sore upon the men which had the mark of the beast, and upon them which worshipped his image.     (KJV)
          (2)   And went away - departed the First of all,

                 and poured out - spilled forth the (wide-mouthed) pan - basin - bowl - vial

                 of him upon / onto the Earth.

                 And it came into being - became as a bad - hurtful - harmful

                 ulcerous sore and painfully malignant - evil

                 into men 

                 [an externally based extremely painful malignant
                  cancer which eats it way into men] ;
     
                  those having - possessing the stamped or engraved mark of the

                  Therion,

                  [the mark of the Beast or Therion being the origin - starting point - source

                    of the evil malignancy]

                  and those adoringly - respecting - kissingly paying homage/praise - falling

                  or bowing down - worshiping the Image (that earthly likeness / copy

                  as drawn or impressed from the original).  (AWPR)
                 
 ³And the second angel poured out his vial upon the sea; and it became as the blood of a dead man: and every living soul died in the sea.      (KJV)
          (3)   And the Second Angel poured/spilled out the (wide-mouthed)

                  pan - basin - bowl - vial of him into the (enclosed) Sea,

                  and it came into being - became blood as of the dead:*

                  and every living - breathing soul in the (enclosed) Sea

                  died off.     (AWPR)
               

 ⁴And the third angel poured out his vial upon the rivers and fountains of waters; and they became blood.      (KJV)
          (4)   And the Third Angel poured/spilled out

                  the (wide-mouthed) pan - basin - bowl - vial into the

                  flowing drinkable waters - the rivers (and streams)                

                  and into the fountains - wells (sources of the flowing waters);

                  and it came into being - became blood.      (AWPR)


 ⁵And I heard the angel of the waters say, Thou art righteous, O Lord, which art, and wast, and shalt be, because thou hast judged thus.      (KJV)
          (5)   And I heard attentively the Angel of the Flowing Waters utter definite words,

                  speaking / saying,

                        'Righteous - just - and true are You, LORD;

                         the Being / who is and who was and who is coming,

                         because these You separated and judged /

                         removing the good from the evil /

                         sat and passed judgment over,    (AWPR)                    


 ⁶For they have shed the blood of saints and prophets, and thou hast given them blood to drink; for they are worthy.      (KJV)
          (6)    Because the blood of the set apart - holy - separated - sanctified - saints

                   and the prophets they spilled/poured out,

                   and blood to them you gave over - bestowed upon them to drink,

                   for they are found heavy upon the scales / are deserving / are worthy.

                   (AWPR)


 ⁷And I heard another out of the altar say, Even so, Lord God Almighty, true and righteous are thy judgments.     (KJV)
          (7)   And I heard attentively another (Angel) of the same kind

                  out of the Sacrificial Altar,

                  saying / speaking,

                        'Certainly Yes, LORD,

                         the GOD, the Almighty - omnipotent - all powerful - ruler over all,

                         true - upright - sincere and cannot lie

                         and righteous - just - true (are) the Krises / Crises -

                         the lawful judgments and rendering of verdicts of You.

                         (AWPR)                       


 ⁸And the fourth angel poured out his vial upon the sun; and power was given unto him to scorch men with fire.      (KJV)
          (8)   And the Fourth Angel poured/spilled out

                  the (wide-mouthed) pan - basin - bowl - vial of him

                  onto / upon the sun,

                  and it was given over - bestowed upon it

                  to scorchingly burn the men in fire.     (AWPR)


 ⁹And men were scorched with great heat, and blasphemed the name of God, which hath power over these plagues: and they repented not to give him glory.      (KJV)
          (9)    And were scorchingly burned the men (with) great burning heat,

                   and blasphemed - hurtfully slandered - used smiting words against

                   the Name of GOD,

                   the (One) having - holding - possessing the

                   power - authority to do or not do

                   upon / over     this one / these  strokes - blows - plagues / calamities;

                   and certainly not repented / changed their mind - thinking - comprehension

                   to give over / bestow upon Him

                   glory / thoughtful recognition and praise duly rendered.   (AWPR)


 ¹⁰And the fifth angel poured out his vial upon the seat of the beast; and his kingdom was full of darkness; and they gnawed their tongues for pain,     (KJV)
          (10)  And the Fifth Angel spilled / poured out

                   the (wide-mouthed)  pan - basin - bowl - vial of  him

                   upon / onto the Throne / seat of dominion of the Therion;

                   and came into being - became  the kingdom of it

                   darkened / filled with darkness;

                   and the squeezed and chewed / gnawed and squeezed

                   the tongues of them out from the

                   pain - travail - toil (which labor required all their strength) [to endure].
                   (AWPR) 


 ¹¹And blasphemed the God of heaven because of their pains and their sores, and repented not of their deeds.      (KJV)
          (11)   And they blasphemed - hurtfully slandered - used smiting words against

                    the GOD of Heaven  out from the

                    pain - travail - toil (which labor required all their strength) [to endure],

                    and out from their ulcerous sores;

                    and they certainly not repented of their

                    works - performances - deeds - acts.       (AWPR)

 ¹²And the sixth angel poured out his vial upon the great river Euphrates; and the water thereof was dried up, that the way of the kings of the east might be prepared.      (KJV)
          (12)   And the Sixth Angel spilled/poured out

                    the (wide-mouthed) pan - basin - bowl - vial of him

                    upon / onto the overflowing river, the great, the Euphrates;

                    and was made dry - dried up the flowing water of it,

                    in order that might be prepared / made ready

                    the wide way - path - highway of the kings,

                    the (ones) from (the) rising sun.      (AWPR)


 ¹³And I saw three unclean spirits like frogs come out of the mouth of the dragon, and out of the mouth of the beast, and out of the mouth of the false prophet.      (KJV)
          (13)   And behold, look and see, I saw

                    from out of the mouth - opening of the dragon - serpent,

                    and from out of the mouth of the Therion,

                    and from out of the mouth of the false prophet,

                    3 spiritually unclean and polluted spirits,

                    one and the same as frogs.      (AWPR)


 ¹⁴For they are the spirits of devils, working miracles, which go forth unto the kings of the earth and of the whole world, to gather them to the battle of that great day of God Almighty.     (KJV)
          (14)   For they are spirits of demons

                    producing - causing to externally manifest and bring about miraculous signs

                    and wonders / notable miracles of significance

                    which go out / come forth upon the kings of the Earth

                    and the whole inhabitable world,

                    to assemble / gather and accept them

                    into the Hostilities / into the War

                    of the Day / of the Time,

                    that one there,

                    the Great of GOD Almighty.       (AWPR)
          

 ¹⁵Behold, I come as a thief. Blessed is he that watcheth, and keepeth his garments, lest he walk naked, and they see his shame.      (KJV)
          (15)   Lo - behold!   I am coming forth (so as to make an appearance)

                    as a Thief  (who steals in secret)

                   [discreetly and unseen, leaving behind only that evidence
                     that they had come and gone].

                    Blessed - having fullness and not being in need - fully satisfied (is)

                    the (one) mindfully watching / refraining from sleep while 

                    arousing oneself to alertness and keeping an eye on / watching /

                    guarding over while attentively observing,

                    and maintaining (their) 

                    outer garment - clothing - mantle / cloak **
                    in order that he may not walk / pass his life / go about naked - uncovered

                    and they may see - look on and perceive/discern 

                    the indecent and ugly shame / deformity of him.     (AWPR)

 ¹⁶And he gathered them together into a place called in the Hebrew tongue Armageddon.    (KJV)
          (16)   And he assembled - gathered together - accepted into the place - region

                    having been called - named - regarded  in Hebrew (as) 

                    Har Megiddon - Mount / Hill of  [the plain of] Megiddo  -  Armageddon.
                    (AWPR)


 ¹⁷And the seventh angel poured out his vial into the air; and there came a great voice out of the temple of heaven, from the throne, saying, It is done.      (KJV)
          (17)   And the Seventh Angel poured / spilled out his 

                   (wide-mouthed)  pan - basin - bowl - vial into the air, 

                    and came out a great voice from the Temple - Sanctuary of Heaven,

                    from the Throne, speaking / saying,

                            'It has come into existence - It has happened.'      (AWPR)                 


 ¹⁸And there were voices, and thunders, and lightnings; and there was a great earthquake, such as was not since men were upon the earth, so mighty an earthquake, and so great.     (KJV)
         (18)    And came into being - occurred
                    sounding voices [that shone forth / echoed in the mind]

                    and (clapping) thunders

                    and lightnings.

                    

                   And a great - large shaking - earthquake
                    came into being - happened - occurred,

                   what kind or sort has certainly not come into being - occurred
                   upon the Earth,

                   so great -vast - mighty - huge a shaking - earthquake,

                   in this manner / thus / (it was) so   

                   great - large - huge!                (AWPR)      

   [Cf. with Revelation 11:19]


 ¹⁹And the great city was divided into three parts, and the cities of the nations fell: and great Babylon came in remembrance before God, to give unto her the cup of the wine of the fierceness of his wrath.
(KJV)
          (19)   And it came into being, the city, the Great, into 3 sides / parts;

                    and the cities of the nations - ethnicities fell down (into ruins).

                    And Babylon the Great was mindfully remembered in the 

                    eye/face of - in the presence of - before GOD,

                    to give - bestow upon her the drinking vessel / cup

                    of the (intoxicating) wine of His Wrath / Grievous Anger

                    (as if provoked).        (AWPR)


 ²⁰And every island fled away, and the mountains were not found.     (KJV)
          (20)   And every island hastily escaped and fled; ***

                    and mountains / hills certainly not were found by any search 

                    or inquiry.        (AWPR)

 ²¹And there fell upon men a great hail out of heaven, every stone about the weight of a talent: and men blasphemed God because of the plague of the hail; for the plague thereof was exceeding great.
 (KJV)
          (21)   And a great - huge hail, in what manner or way as [the size] of a Talent
                    [about 75 1/2 US lbs.] 
                    comes down / descending from out of Heaven upon the men;

                    and the men blasphemed - hurtfully slandered - used smiting words against

                    GOD out from the stroke - blow -plague / calamity of the hail,

                    because stroke - blow - plague / calamity of it is 

                    exceedingly / very vehemently great -large - excessively violent.

                    (AWPR)


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My Comments: 
* verse 2:    -  blood as of the dead
                  As in a state of lividity - the separation of a clear to pinkish Plasma 

                  (near 0% up to a 10% Solutes in near 100% to as little as 90% water),
                   the watery plasma rises as the red blood cells settles...
                   the water or watery plasma solution in this dead state
                    is normally floating above a thin layer
                   of Leukocytes (white blood cells) and Thrombocytes (platelets),
                   which in turn are above the gravitated / very dense and high reddish 

                  solution of Erythrocytes (red blood cells).
                        The discoloration may possibly appear to be as if  the Sea were not only a 
                  to behave as the blood of the dead, in which the currents cease and the waters 
                  stop,  and from at the first appears as if were black and blue mixed in with the
                  greater red volume,, before the bloody Sea settles in its stillness into a watery 
                  solution floating atop the crimson depths.


** verse 15  -  outer garment - clothing - mantle / cloak: 

                        refers back to Isaiah 59:17, where a believer's "zeal" or "doing the

                        will of GOD and maintaining his honor, 

                        especially including state in which one is provoked with 

                        the passions of jealousy and envy to the point of violence"

                        is as the mantle / cloak of their spiritual armor in the LORD. 
                   

  ***verse 20 -  And every island hastily escaped and fled:
                    Disappeared beneath the waves, receded into the Earth,

                    ceasing their mountainous elevation above the waves...as

                    is apparent by the next part of the verse ... and mountains / hills 
                    certainly not were found by any search or inquiry.